- The radar channels would be excellent.

- So if anyone is looking for things to do, I need that info sorted and basic copy written

- Cdamoci@gmail.com

- Probably can't write copy till this weekend, but can fill in holes then.

- He's a scary question. Can these tools be used to see when gear is dropped between agents, As in, where we meet to swap keys or gear drops?

- Because, I drop agents gear at my home, and at theirs at times.

- Not at the presented level of coverage.

- You'd need really comprehensive scanner bot scraping for that.

- In order to detect that kind of activity you'd need -- yeah. Like one bot pretending to be a scanner every 500 meters or so.

- 100x the granularity of what this is

- Well, that is calming news at least

- This is still not fixed, not sure if it was intended to be by now.

- I can't fix for about an hour, just document things here

- 👍👍

- Ignore the grammar error staring you in the face

- but it's farting me into space

- Spacing on the homepage is a little funky

- let's do content first, maybe

- Yes

- once the words and data are right, style will follow

- I'm limited to mobile until later tonight. Can work on writing content then if necessary

- [[GIF, size 45'664 bytes]]

- you've been working very hard all day and we love you :)

- lol

- "An additional function called RADAR enables Resistance agents to receive automated real time alerts on intel triggers, such as:
– links over 20km thrown within 30 minutes of checkpoints
– mod deployment (specifically VRLA)"

Since these are examples I'd rephrase the last part to
- mod deployment of VRLA

- #notes

- "Mod deployment, such as VR hack mods and VRLA"

- "Authorized agents also have access to an application called Omnivore, which allows them to launch bot interfaces elsewhere to further propagate this scraped data."

It's a subset of the authorized agents for RIOT right? Maybe "Some authorized agents"? Since not exactly parallel to previous population described with "authorized agents"

- "Mod deployment. Ain't nobody paying attention to the common shields"

- "mod deployment, notably VRLA"

- during the fielding event - i picked up and dropped 5 capsules for three days in a row without issue

- "mod deployment of (mods)" sounds like the dept of redundancy dept

- "such as mod deployment such as VR hack mods and VRLA" is a lot of such ases. We're already in an example.

- "deployment of VRLA or VR hack mods"

- I feel like we might be stuck on a fairly minor point

- 👍

- Permission to proceed with nitpicking? 😄

- I can move on

- I will pick one of the options, I see what you mean

- Perfectionists gonna perfectionise

- Lol, yep. Next

- Ok, this thing.

- Whats the website again. Just got home and on a laptop

- I can't Grant you access yet

- In "The functionality that drives these features and their use are clear violations of the Niantic Terms of Service. While this particular group has been in operation since October of 2015, the underlying service and database have been active for over 3 years."

is "this particular group" really "this particular Slack"?

- Slack us more accurate

- Is

- cool - no prob. how about the other channel

- 👍

- What other channel?

- "There is no way to know how many others interact with the bots they administer, but its estimated to be as high as 15,000."

s/its/it's or it is

- #notes

- We'll get this right. The thing has to be Readable as Fuck

- like a Family Circus one-panel

- Hmm, maybe "the number is estimated", actually. #nitpick

- Also Niantic style: I think they capitalize all 3 letters of POC usually?

- #notes

- Search here for "chatter"

- [[Photo]]

- There is no way to know how many others interact with the bots they administer, but

- also updated in the pin.

- suggestion: "thousands"

- This whole thing should be punctuated with pullquotes

- #notes

- I think WordPress has a way to collapse things under a Read More tag. Can we do that with the long list of agents? It's somewhat unlikely for people to read past that to the next text -- should either be collapsed or be a link.

- I would, but I don't know what I want to give up anything about the source.

- I want it to go on and on and make an impact.

- Nothing after the list is necessary reading.

- I was thinking maybe a table with a few columns, but it's still gonna be long af

- Maybe include the link to the evidence before it then?

- I debated that too.

- But since the evidence is listed on the side menu opted against

- I'm open

- "Insane statement"
hyperlink: would you like to know more?

- You know what would be pretty is embedding a Google Doc with the list.

- YES

- I did it.

- But it wasn't searchable

- Ah.

- [[GIF, size 14'005 bytes]]

- I can show you all

- Also another point of identification.

- It's in a new clean gdoc owned by then away email

- there are just so many bombs.

I like leading with the RAID interface

- Cleaningress@gmail.com

- I might almost put the list on a separate tab and just let the intro be an intro.

- True. Could have little blurbs and links to Branch out to the rest of the story

- And other pages.

- "click here for a list of all agents involved" or whatever
#notes

- On Roster, maybe X not Yes ?

- before we go any further on this, I wanna establish a ground rule:

Erich, you volunteered to do the work, you get to make the decisions. YOu've been in this since the beginning and we trust you to do a good job. You get to reject any feedback you want without spending a lot of time feeling bad about it. We know you mostly won't do this, and it's fine. We know if you burn out or can't hit deadline, you'll hand off.

- um, that's all.

- I think that makes it less readable

- wow . RIOT is pretty damning.

- Thank you for the affirmation

- But not necessary

- You're going to get pummeled with maybes.

- I want this to nail them

- anyway, gary on

- Editorial is positive

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