- "carry on"

- You misspelled that.

- Take it sleazy

- lol

- "That’s how long it takes for agent Crooth5 to lose a guardian he has been tending for 146 days once EpsilonPrime decides that he wants it gone.

First, he makes a query to find any guardians this agent has."

"he" in second paragraph may want to be EpsilonPrime

- #notes

- "Next, he searches within the broker network for the nearest agent willing to kill it. He immediately find 3 within a few kilometers, and they each receive a ping alert with the portal information."

s/find/finds

- #notes

- you have a way with words, son.

I TOTALLY SET YOU UP FOR THAT

- "Agent Badeye99 responds that he’ll get it in several hours, but another nearby, agent GeneralEObvious is happy to help, creating a trail of captures so his strike is less noticeable."

Commas:

another nearby agent, GeneralEObvious, is happy to help

- Could we pin the site for review? I'm having trouble finding it, unless we don't see it until permissions are granted?

- #notes

- doing

- You don't yet. But maybe 30 mins I will have toh

- "Sincere apologies to agent Crooth5 for serving as demonstration."

maybe "using him as demonstration"? serving feels not quite right

- Completely fine - just didn't want to be accidentally slacking. Thanks!

- #notes

- [[Photo]]

- is that our screenshot or RES? what's the green overlay in top left?

- That's what stock looks like

- AP required for Level 16?

- Ours

- Use the fewest words possible. Don't reference the agent. Don't acknowledge that maybe you should have referenced the agent.

- Good question

- Mm, yeah, may be better without this.

- Weird, I don't have that but I guess I'm 16. Just wanted to make sure it's not a plugin or something.

- It needs something to drive home the receiving agents feelings and loss.

- I think it's clear actually.

- MOAR IMPACT

- anything i can do now?

- We watched this guy get a guardian killed.

- A weak apology doesn't increase the impact.

- Just went through the stuff you guys did today. AMAZING WORK

- My general sense is that this website should have a clinical, sterile feel. Minimum exposition and framing. The data tells the story.

- Pedantic input: you install mods, you deploy resonators

- time stamps put it before he told us about it

- no factionalism, nothing to attack

- AP Style

- You can review the images and docs the WB put together, write some copy for a page explaining what radar is and what channels there are

- Agree 100%. The anger, sadness, and betrayal will come without any prompting.

- the website is PART of a narrative, not the whole thing. We humanize it in our g+ follow-ups

- AP as in Associated Press or AP composition style format?

- "One hour nine minutes" seems to drive it home pretty effectively imo

- Alright

- everyone takes a different piece of the data and injects life into it

- Alright

- Next

- This

- you're all very convincing

- Associated Press

- In bot gallery, what are the icons of the apps the agent is using? Probably doesn't matter but I don't recognize them.

- I don't know ejther

- A text box with a heart right?

- Spacing in bot gallery is a little random -- rows of 2 then rows of 4?

- That's how it autoformats

- weeeird

- I can play with settings

- and a crown thing?

- Oh but I see you can click to page through. if that works reliably across operating systems, may be worth indicating that.

- Yea, it's a gallery

- I can make #notes on them

- "First, he makes a query to find any guardians this agent has." /s/he/EpsilonPrime

- Backlog

- And none of these screenshots are complete duplicates although some names repeat, I think?

- I found one total duplicate and left it in

- I think that's right. More = better, less fakable, less for people to pick at.

- Fair, ok.

- What additional evidence do we plan to upload?

- addition of 'riot' column

- A page for bot, a page for radar, a page for omnivore, and a page for raid.one

- sweet, that's the text we need written, ok

- We have unused grabs and can do more indeoth explanations

- This is beautiful and you are beautiful

- Your mom is beautiful

- Search output is a little hard to read, but may not be fixable since it's coming from a spreadsheet.

- Whistle gave us permission to use her pullquotes, and I think we should. They're powerful AF

- I know, semi can vouch

- [[Photo]]

- Maybe

- https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B-ERhFknO7kMaEp2SHQ3aDRoQ2s?usp=sharing

- I know, I'd like a way to clean that up

- But haven't found one

- Maybe a different search widget

- I mean I wouldn't say beautiful so much as 'smouldering'

- Otherwise I'll remove

- @TheMedellia photo now pl0x

- you know the one

- If it just linked to the page without the preview I feel like that would be better.

- Yea.

- Unsearchable isn't so bad if it's in alphabetical order and scrollable.

- Okay I have no further nitpicks at this time. Erich thank you so much for pulling this together.

- Yeah but being able to type in 'thesolo' and get hits feels so fucking good.

- It is. And I agree

- [[Photo]]

- One way to fix would be to make a page for each agent

- With nothing else on it.

- Maybe an important possible

- hmmmm, not sure it's worth is

- Import

- Domain.domain/agent/thesolo

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