Whistle Orga

You know what would be pretty is embedding a Google Doc with the list.

YES

I did it.

But it wasn't searchable

Ah.

[[GIF, size 14'005 bytes]]

I can show you all

Also another point of identification.

It's in a new clean gdoc owned by then away email

there are just so many bombs.


I like leading with the RAID interface

I might almost put the list on a separate tab and just let the intro be an intro.

True. Could have little blurbs and links to Branch out to the rest of the story

And other pages.

"click here for a list of all agents involved" or whatever
#notes

On Roster, maybe X not Yes ?

before we go any further on this, I wanna establish a ground rule:


Erich, you volunteered to do the work, you get to make the decisions. YOu've been in this since the beginning and we trust you to do a good job. You get to reject any feedback you want without spending a lot of time feeling bad about it. We know you mostly won't do this, and it's fine. We know if you burn out or can't hit deadline, you'll hand off.

um, that's all.

I think that makes it less readable

wow . RIOT is pretty damning.

Thank you for the affirmation

But not necessary

You're going to get pummeled with maybes.

I want this to nail them

anyway, gary on

Editorial is positive

"carry on"

You misspelled that.

Take it sleazy

lol

"That’s how long it takes for agent Crooth5 to lose a guardian he has been tending for 146 days once EpsilonPrime decides that he wants it gone.


First, he makes a query to find any guardians this agent has."


"he" in second paragraph may want to be EpsilonPrime

#notes

"Next, he searches within the broker network for the nearest agent willing to kill it. He immediately find 3 within a few kilometers, and they each receive a ping alert with the portal information."


s/find/finds

#notes

you have a way with words, son.


I TOTALLY SET YOU UP FOR THAT

"Agent Badeye99 responds that he’ll get it in several hours, but another nearby, agent GeneralEObvious is happy to help, creating a trail of captures so his strike is less noticeable."


Commas:


another nearby agent, GeneralEObvious, is happy to help

Could we pin the site for review? I'm having trouble finding it, unless we don't see it until permissions are granted?

#notes

doing

You don't yet. But maybe 30 mins I will have toh

"Sincere apologies to agent Crooth5 for serving as demonstration."


maybe "using him as demonstration"? serving feels not quite right

Completely fine - just didn't want to be accidentally slacking. Thanks!

#notes

[[Photo]]

is that our screenshot or RES? what's the green overlay in top left?

That's what stock looks like

AP required for Level 16?

Ours

Use the fewest words possible. Don't reference the agent. Don't acknowledge that maybe you should have referenced the agent.

Good question

Mm, yeah, may be better without this.

Weird, I don't have that but I guess I'm 16. Just wanted to make sure it's not a plugin or something.

It needs something to drive home the receiving agents feelings and loss.

I think it's clear actually.

MOAR IMPACT

anything i can do now?

We watched this guy get a guardian killed.

A weak apology doesn't increase the impact.

Just went through the stuff you guys did today. AMAZING WORK

My general sense is that this website should have a clinical, sterile feel. Minimum exposition and framing. The data tells the story.

Pedantic input: you install mods, you deploy resonators

time stamps put it before he told us about it

no factionalism, nothing to attack

AP Style

You can review the images and docs the WB put together, write some copy for a page explaining what radar is and what channels there are

Agree 100%. The anger, sadness, and betrayal will come without any prompting.

the website is PART of a narrative, not the whole thing. We humanize it in our g+ follow-ups

AP as in Associated Press or AP composition style format?

"One hour nine minutes" seems to drive it home pretty effectively imo

Alright

everyone takes a different piece of the data and injects life into it

Alright

Next

This

you're all very convincing

Associated Press

In bot gallery, what are the icons of the apps the agent is using? Probably doesn't matter but I don't recognize them.

I don't know ejther

A text box with a heart right?

Spacing in bot gallery is a little random -- rows of 2 then rows of 4?

That's how it autoformats

weeeird

I can play with settings

and a crown thing?

Oh but I see you can click to page through. if that works reliably across operating systems, may be worth indicating that.

Yea, it's a gallery

I can make #notes on them

"First, he makes a query to find any guardians this agent has." /s/he/EpsilonPrime

Backlog

And none of these screenshots are complete duplicates although some names repeat, I think?

I found one total duplicate and left it in

I think that's right. More = better, less fakable, less for people to pick at.

Fair, ok.

What additional evidence do we plan to upload?

addition of 'riot' column

A page for bot, a page for radar, a page for omnivore, and a page for raid.one

sweet, that's the text we need written, ok

We have unused grabs and can do more indeoth explanations

This is beautiful and you are beautiful

Your mom is beautiful